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Woman badly hurt in fall from third-floor hotel balcony on 30th birthday trip to Greece

Denby McLaren, from Larkhall in South Lanarkshire, broke her back and foot falling from a hotel balcony in Greece. Her family has set up a fundraiser to pay for an air ambulance home.

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Image: Daily Mirror
Image: Daily Mail

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The story, neutrally told

Mixed · 2Denby McLaren, from Larkhall in South Lanarkshire, was badly injured after falling from a third-floor hotel balcony while on holiday in Greece celebrating her 30th birthday with her mother. Right · 1The Daily Mail places the fall in Rhodes; the Daily Mirror says only Greece. Mixed · 2She suffered a broken vertebra, multiple broken bones in her foot and other injuries, and had spent four days in hospital in Greece by the time the fundraiser's appeal was written.

Mixed · 2A fundraiser set up for her says she needs specialist repatriation by air ambulance, travelling on a stretcher with medical assistance throughout. The Mail says her partner, Craig Anderson, set it up and wrote the appeal. Mixed · 2The Mail reports she faces a £10,000 medical bill in Greece. The Mirror does not give a bill figure and says only that the repatriation cost adds strain. Mixed · 2The fundraiser had passed £10,700 by the Mirror's report and £11,000 by the Mail's later one. On Monday Mr Anderson thanked donors and said the family hoped to bring her home soon.

Mixed · 2Neither article says how she came to fall, and neither quotes hospital staff, hotel staff or authorities. Both rely on the family's fundraising appeal.

Every sentence links to the reporting it rests on. The pill in front of each says where its sources sit: Left, Centre or Right when one side supplies at least half of them, Mixed when they are evenly split. The number is how many outlets it cites.

Left1 outlet

Framing
Short human-interest report built on the family's fundraiser, centred on the holiday that turned into a long recovery.
Emphasis
The family's wish to bring her home and the injuries; the fundraiser total.
Leaves out or plays down
Does not name Rhodes, the partner who set up the fundraiser or a bill figure.
Charged language
“dream holiday”
For example
“celebrating her 30th birthday on a dream holiday in Greece” — Daily Mirror

Centre0 outlets

No centre outlet in our sources has covered this story yet.

Right1 outlet

Framing
Leads on her being 'stranded' with a £10,000 medical bill, with the family's 'desperate bid' to bring her home.
Emphasis
The cost, the stranded status, the named partner and his social media update.
Leaves out or plays down
Gives no cause of the fall.
Charged language
“stranded”“plunge”“desperate bid”
For example
“British woman is left stranded in Greek hospital with £10,000 medical bill” — Daily Mail
“have now begun a desperate bid to bring her home” — Daily Mail

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